Enjoy reading our narratives. We will be reading these aloud.
Our narratives included the following:
Planning in pictorial form
Including information about
setting.
Writing a sequence of
events.
Focusing on one or two
characters and their actions.
Writing a simple ending.
Once on Christmas Eve Santa made a dinosaur be
Santa for a change with a t-rex for Rudolph.
The
dinosaur tried to get down the chimney but he was so fat so the chucked the
presents down the chimney.
The
next morning it took too long for him to get out come out to give me my
presents.
The
next time he went out the door the t-rex was asleep for half the night. He
roared at me. It was cool with all the presents for next year.
Robbie
The
dinosaur asked the snake ‘Let’s have a race so they started the race.
When
the race started they both moved very slow.
Cole
R
Once
upon a time there was a cottage made of wood. Along came the girl called
Goldilocks.
She
didn’t know that there were three bears living in that cottage. They were just
on a walk in the woods and out of the woods and walked home to eat their
porridge.
When
they came back the three bears said,"Whose been eating my porridge?” Baby
bear said”, Someone’s been eating my porridge and they have eaten it all up.
Baby bear cried for two minutes and then he stopped.
He
heard something upstairs ‘Someone is sleeping in my bed. “ It was a girl with
gold hair. She jumped out of bead and ran away.
Hunter.
There
was a T-Rex , a Spinosauraus and a volcano.
The
Spinosauraus survived and the t-rex did not survive and after that when the t-
rex died and blocked the volcano and after all that the rest of the dinosaurs survived.
Ryan
Once
upon a time there was a volcano and a dinosaur. They lived in a
desert….AAAAAhhh the volcano exploded!
Later
they ran off to a castle and they were safe.
But the larva went on the castle but they
survived and they lived happily ever after.
Jimmy
Once upon a time there was a lion and a boy.
The lion got caught in a net.The boy helped the lion get out of the net because
the boy had a wee knife to cut the net.
So the lion and the boy were friends.
Ben
Once there were
three little pigs. The first little pig made a house out of straw. Then the big
bad wolf blew it down.
The pig ran to the second house . Along came
the wolf, “Let me in,” said the wolf. “No”, said the pig.
He blew the house down that was made of
sticks.
They
ran to the brother’s house whose house was made of bricks.
Caleb
Once there were two worms. Two worms were
racing
They were trying to set out of the ground and
finally they got out. One couldn’t get
out.
One got caught and then the next day the other go out
Malachi
Once upon a
time in a jungle there lived a king and a robber. The robber came along and said,
“I am going to have this castle. We will have to have a competition. Whoever
wins gets the castle and I will get everything.
I will be
famous. I will have thousands of dollars and I will be king.
I will have the crown and the thousands of
crystals and my house will be shiny and colorful. The war may start in
7-6-5-4-3-2-1-0. The war is on!
Tim.
The dinosaur
zapped the lion because the lion wanted the sword.
The lion fell
to sleep.
The dinosaur
walked away with the sword.
Cole H
I am in snow
with my Mum and my family.
We are making a
snowman with a blue nose and I made a dog and a cat.
Then I made a hole and a hill.
Alex
Once upon a time there was a dragon and a
snake.
The snake is a king cobra.
The dragon is a night fairy. He never
misses. He never shows himself. He
never steals food.
The
dragon and the snake live happily ever after
Sam
It was a sunny
day. There was a tortoise and a hare.
They were
having a race. The hare was in the lead.
Then the hare
took a nap. Then the tortoise was in the lead now. The hare woke up and the
tortoise won the race!
Jack
Lion and tiger are
fighting and sleeping in the forest.
Conna
The hare and the tortoise
started the race and the hare was in the lead.
The hare took a nap and then
the tortoise got in the lead.
Then the hare woke up and the
tortoise was already at the finish line. The hare cried, ‘Waa waa-waaaaa”.
Matthew
Once upon a time there was a
mouse and a lion.
The lion got trapped in the
hunters’ trap and the mouse helped him out.
Thomas
RTD2
and Luke Skywalker blew up the star with a bomb.
They
hit Darvader on his tail and Darvader went spinning into space.
Jacob.
In a desert there lived snakes and dinosaurs.
The
snakes were beating the dinosaurs but the snake poisoned the dinosaurs. They
both died.
In
eleven years all of the dinosaurs died. All there was left was darkness and wet
sand.
One
day lightening struck the middle of the earth. Then at night fairy the dragons
came. Then the hole as covered with night fairy dragons!
Markus
Elephant and Santa
Once upon a time there was an
elephant and Santa. The elephant has a red nose.
They were making toys. They
were happy but then something was scaring them. It was really scary!
It was an evil chicken with
one thousand legs and one thousand and ninety nine heads!
They ran away. They got their
toys and ran away.
Kyron
One day there were some mice
playing hide and seek. The mouse went in the cave. He woke up the lion. Then
the lion picked up the mouse. The mouse said,” One day I will help you.”
“Help me! “,said the lion. “You can’t help me.
I’m the king of the jungle and you’re a just a little mouse”, said the mouse.
He ran away. The next day the mouse heard a
Roar!!!!!!
“That must be the lion caught”,
said the Lion.
“He must be in trouble.”
He went to the lion’s cave. He
saw the lion was trapped. Then he saved him.
Fabian
A boy was walking .He found a
castle. He went in. He saw a king with a with a lazer sword. He had an army to
fight with him. He defeated the king.
Josh
